A New Collection Review: Interconnected Narratives of Pain

Twelve-year-old Freya is visiting her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she meets 14-year-old twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the days that follow, they will rape her, then entomb her breathing, combination of anxiety and irritation flitting across their faces as they eventually liberate her from her makeshift coffin.

This might have stood as the disturbing main event of a novel, but it's just one of many terrible events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – issued distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to achieve peace in the contemporary moment.

Debated Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's release has been overshadowed by the presence of Earth, the second novella, on the longlist for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other candidates withdrew in protest at the author's controversial views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Conversation of trans rights is not present from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of big issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the influence of mainstream and online outlets, parental neglect and assault are all explored.

Multiple Stories of Pain

  • In Water, a mourning woman named Willow relocates to a isolated Irish island after her husband is incarcerated for horrific crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on legal proceedings as an participant to rape.
  • In Fire, the adult Freya balances revenge with her work as a medical professional.
  • In Air, a dad flies to a funeral with his young son, and ponders how much to reveal about his family's history.
Suffering is layered with suffering as damaged survivors seem doomed to meet each other again and again for forever

Related Stories

Relationships proliferate. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who reappears in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one account return in cottages, pubs or legal settings in another.

These plot threads may sound complex, but the author knows how to power a narrative – his earlier acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been converted into many languages. His businesslike prose bristles with suspenseful hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to toy with fire"; "the primary step I do when I reach the island is alter my name".

Personality Development and Storytelling Power

Characters are portrayed in brief, impactful lines: the empathetic Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes echo with tragic power or perceptive humour: a boy is punched by his father after having an accident at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade jabs over cups of weak tea.

The author's knack of carrying you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an previous story a genuine frisson, for the first few times at least. Yet the collective effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times nearly comic: suffering is accumulated upon pain, chance on chance in a grim farce in which wounded survivors seem fated to encounter each other again and again for eternity.

Conceptual Complexity and Concluding Assessment

If this sounds not exactly life and closer to purgatory, that is element of the author's thesis. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have suffered, caught in routines of thought and behavior that churn and plunge and may in turn hurt others. The author has talked about the influence of his own experiences of abuse and he describes with sympathy the way his characters negotiate this perilous landscape, reaching out for remedies – seclusion, cold ocean swims, forgiveness or invigorating honesty – that might bring illumination.

The book's "fundamental" framing isn't particularly instructive, while the rapid pace means the examination of sexual politics or digital platforms is mainly shallow. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a entirely accessible, survivor-centered saga: a valued riposte to the usual obsession on authorities and perpetrators. The author shows how suffering can affect lives and generations, and how duration and compassion can soften its aftereffects.

Sarah Hancock
Sarah Hancock

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